Life Drawer

Life Drawer

Letting his Imagination run wild, the scracthing of the slend pencil and the fine paper, he finished off drawing the big grey monster sailing across the cold hearted blue waves.

                                             “Done”

as he finished drawing the last line on the smooth paper.
Suddenly he started saying something at the drawing, it was a faint whisper of words yet un-known to the world. A big gust of cold air started creeping into the room, Once you closed your eyes the long awaited fun begins… The Drawing… It suddenly moved across the narrow road of paper, slowly stedily moving off into the distance.

The picture frame, as it sailed across it started to go in, the picture
frame. The next thing you saw was a big long adventurous Ship sailing across in the distant blue cold Ocean.

That was his magical tallent, he was the Life Drawer, he made his imagination take over and he looked like an ordanery guy but he was the change he is the one making his mark on This big world because he had his flooding pictures of IMAGINATION.

You know he is the best Artist in the world and it takes a little to move alot. Some wonderfull things might Drift away fast, but you know, it always stays with your dream blasted Imagininations.          


-Illustrated by Deana Kydd, Dream big :)

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  1. Anonymous25 June 2017 at 15:06

    Feedback: I liked it! It was very creative and the descriptive words are very good.

    Feed forward: Add the five senses in your writing and a simile. Also fix some of the spelling mistakes.

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